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Post by neko on Aug 6, 2009 16:22:07 GMT -5
Here is one of your posts, (Just going to delete the posts in the help status, I forgot to lock it earlier XD),
I am a sucker for detail, so this post is a good but it needs a little work. It seems boring, but it makes your character pop, and really show the people in their minds how your character is.
I don't see much about your pelt or eye color, or your emotions. I want detail on how you feel, and how does it look around you, I want to know what's going on in your head, and what the world is like through your eyes...and spell check please...I see a few errors.
I don't mean to be mean or rude, I undertstand how bad writers block can be, but I want you to do your best here so you are inspired to post and post and keep bettering your posts ^^
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